Movie Stuff (yeah i'm already moving on)

Ok everyone, here is a sneak peek at what I have of the script so far. It is just the first scene. We do also need to think of a title for this movie. So if you have any ideas PLEASE speak up!! Hope you like it.

Introduction

(During the pre-movie credits show the two ambassadors traveling)

Scene 1

(Maldrorian Great Hall, King Branson and councilors in a meeting)

Councilor 1:  ...so you see, sire, we must make this trade with the Rymber's. Nothing can go wrong, it will only serve our countries purposes. (Sits down)

King Branson: Very well. You have convinced me. We will make the trade and you will oversee it. Meeting adjourned! (Everyone exits except King and servants) Please bring me a drink,_____.

Servant: Yes sire. (exits)

Servant 2: (enters) Sire, there are two men here who will not give their identities yet demand that they speak with you. I wanted to ask your permission before letting them in. They seemed very suspicious. They are in the courtyard.

King Branson: Hmm...(stands up and walks over to window and looks down on the two ambassadors) They look like they are of noble birth... somewhere north of here. Do you think they could be from Rymber? 

(Servant enters with drink, and king takes it, servant exits.

Servant 2: No, they look like nothing of what I know of Rymber's, and I traveled all through that land.

King Branson: Well, let them in. But make sure that they are accompanied by guards. 

Servant 2: Yes sire. (exits, King Branson sits)

Queen Elyssa: (entering holding baby and with another maid holding other baby.) Branson? 

King Branson: Yes come in. You may sit here with me while I meet with some ambassadors. (Queen sits)

Servant 2: (enters along with guards and ambassadors.) Sire. The ambassadors are here.

Ambassador 1: Sire. (both bow) We have come to treat with you about certain matters.

King Branson: And those matter's would be?

(Ambassadors whip out some knives and kill all guards. Then knock out the maid and hold king and queen and knife point.)

Ambassador 2: Now, you will give us the babies. Or we will kill you and all the nobles which have just been summoned.

King Branson: What do you mean they've all been summoned?

Ambassador 2: You summoned them (laughs). So what will it be? The babies, or letting your country go into mayhem, and we will still get the babies.

King Branson: Fine, take them.

Queen Elyssa: No! You cant take them!

King Branson: Shh! I dont like it any more than you do. But it's for the good of the people. (Hands over babies)

Ambassador 1: Thank you. Well, time to go! Glad you made the right decision. (Ambassadors exit)